Amreen was unimpressed with the house the broker showed. The entrance was narrow and the bedroom window was accessible from the alley. She said to the broker ‘I don’t like this one. Show me some more houses.’
The broker said ‘This is the best house Madaam.’
Just then, Amreen saw Afroz coming down the alley. The broker saw Amreen staring at Afroz, from the sparkle in her eyes he understood.
He said naughtily ‘This man passes through this alley at least ten times a day. He lives just two houses away’. Amreen made up her mind. This was the house.
Trina Looks Back 
All is fair in love 😊
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He he he
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Ha, I’m not sure it’s the best decision from a real estate point of view, but if it be her happiness then why not?!
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Ya… living in a dingy house for the sake of love😂😂😂
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Such a sweet story . Lovely! I adore the romantic in her. May he be worth the sacrifice. 🙂
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The broker and the man are probably in it together! Another day, another lady, another property! A great little yarn.
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Aha! Love can make us see beautiful like the birds making a nest. Love the end:)
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Loved this take on the prompt.
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Thanks
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Dear Trina,
When it comes to real estate, they say location is everything. Hope it works for her. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle….I am happy you liked it.
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Haha 😂😂😂 now did that real estate agent hire Afroz? 🤔😂
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That is a possibility😂😂😂
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Aha! 😂😂😂😂😂
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Deliciously appetising ❤️
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😉😉
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Aha! Wily realtor who spotted the advantage. I hope Amreen and Afroz find each other 🙂
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Even I hope so…thanks for the comment Granonine
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Well that’s as good a reason to buy a certain house than any other. Loved it, Balaka! :o)
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Thanks a lot.
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Ah, the things attractive makes us do! Well written.
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Thanks Sascha
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Short nice story…in fact too short but nicely written… 😉
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It is a flash fiction…had to write within 100 words
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Yay! What a naughty broker! A lovely piece of humorous writing.
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Thanks penny
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Ha ha a quick reconsider, taking everything into account
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Ya…all fair in love
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Maybe the vaastu of the house might help her love. Sweet little tale, Balaka. Well done on the prompt. Cheers, Varad
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Thanks varad… getting compliment from an amazing storyteller like you means a lot
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