“Om, please do not run. I am scared you will break the vases” Trina warned.
“Don’t worry Mom” Om replied while running.
The Parsi owner of the store was looking at Om with a smile fixed on his face.
Trina felt embarrassed at her son’s attitude. She nearly apologised and said “I am so sorry. I hope he breaks nothing.”
The man smiled and said “Let him break, my vases can be replaced but his childhood laughter is irreplaceable.” He paused and said “Please do not stop him, there is sound of laughter in my shop after a long time.”
Word count: 100
Picture Courtesy: Sarah Ann Hall
This post is written for Friday Fictioners hosted by our dear Rochelle Wissof. To read more stories written for Friday Fictioners please click here.
You almost never get to see such large hearted gestures these days. Heartwarming!
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Thank you Mayuri
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Sweet story, and so true. There is something so uplifting about a child’s laughter.
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Thanks a lot Iain
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Loved the story you weaved around the photo prompts of Urns in the picture 🙂
Indeed that kid’s laughter filling his store is priceless when compared to the worth of Urns!
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Thank you for this lovely comment Keerthi
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That’s a sweet one. How many folks really are that kind these days!
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Ya, kindness is becoming an obsolete virtue..thanks Parul for reading.
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Such people are very rare. I am glad there are such folks who know the importance of childhood. 🙂
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Beautifully done, Balaka.
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Thanks Varad…am writing after a long time.
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Dear Balaka
What a dear man and a sweet story surrounding him.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle
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You can’t put a price on joy! Delightful.
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A very sweet story, Balaka . I wonder what this man’s story is! You have inspired me to read about the tiny Parsi Community in India.
P.S. Great to see you here, again.
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Thank you Moon
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that’s such a cute thought – this carefree phase of childhood will not last forever
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Well, that took an unexpected turn! That’s a most unusual shopkeeper.
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You have written a lovely story that uplifts me.
It’s not a conventional short story with a twist – or a build-up of intensity – or a list – or humorous – but it works extremely well. You have shown great sensitivity in how you’ve painted all the characters. I think we’d all enjoy Om’s laughter, we’d all feel apologetic like Trina, and we’d all revere the Parsi shopkeeper for his willingness to let the child put his vases at risk. I wonder when he last had childish laughter in his shop, and who the child was…
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Aww! Such an understanding store owner. Lovely story as usual, my dear!
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What a sweet story!
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Now that is something you don’t see very often! Lucky for her…
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She knows 😉
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Yes
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