Mona was a live-in maid at my friend A’s house. She was around 12 years when she started working at their house. A’s mom had two sons and always craved for a daughter. While on a trip to her native village she found Mona in abject poverty. Mona had a stepmother and 13 siblings. There was never enough food for her in the house. A’s mom took an instant liking for the girl and decided to bring her along with her. Mona’s dad and stepmom were more than happy to get rid of a mouth and also some extra income.
When Mona came to A’s house she resembled a stick. However, in the care of A’s mom she gradually started gaining weight and started looking pretty. A’s mom never treated her like a maid and started sending her to a nearby school. At home also Mona was never burdened with too much work. She was like a daughter to A’s parents and a younger sister to A and his elder brother. She also had a room for herself. A’s mom used to buy her nice clothes and accessories whenever she went shopping.
I used to go to A’s house for chemistry tuitions and Mona used to be fond of me. She used to call me ‘Chordi (younger sister)’. She used to call A ‘Chorda(younger brother)’ and as I was A’s classmate she probably preferred calling me that. We developed a friendship. Whenever I went to their house A’s mom used to serve me tea and always some special dish. A’s mom, myself and Mona used to sit together and chat over tea and biscuit till chemistry teacher came.
After my class 12th exam I stopped going for tuitions. Even though A remained my friend I stopped going to his house frequently. Gradually I forgot about Mona. A few years later, I joined an NGO to do my M.Phil internship. The NGO used to work with trafficked women. In that center, I met a girl who used to stare at me relentlessly. I never recognised that girl though.
One day, when I was alone the girl came and sat next to me. She looked at me with wide eyes and said ‘Chordi, you forgot me.’ The word Chordi ran like an electric shock through my veins. I had never expected a beautiful girl like Mona to land up in this place. I wanted to ask her but she left in a hurry. I immediately called A and asked him if he knew about the whereabouts of Mona. He said that two years back Mona’s father came and took away Mona from their house to marry her off. She got married within a month and her husband took her to Mumbai. A never heard anything from her after that.
Next day, in the centre I searched for Mona but she was nowhere to be seen. I asked the centre head about her. She said that Mona alias Laxmi was rescued from a brothel in Mumbai. Her husband sold her after taking the dowry amount and jewelry from her. She stayed in the brothel for almost a year and then was rescued.
Next day, I met Mona in the corridor. She held my hand and asked ‘Are you still in touch with Chorda?’ I nodded. With a desperation in her eyes, she said ‘Please don’t tell them anything about me.’ Tears started rolling down her cheeks.
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Oh this is heartbreaking Balaka; did you tell A about meeting her? Is she still at the NGO? I hope she is doing well. Our society is full of instances like this; women are mere commodities to be traded in for a few bucks. Sad to read this tale.
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Such a sad story! 😦 I hope the NGO was able to help the poor girl.
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I hope she is well now after being rescued . Thankfully she was rescued. We are all vulnerable looking at the manner our society is headed . It feels so unsafe for our children. What kind of works are we giving them.
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These incidents wrench my heart. So sad and infuriating. When would these trafficking ever stop.
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What sadness. I pray she found peace somewhere safe.
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Heart wrenching, Balaka. I hope Mona is safe now and has a smile on her lips. Life can be so merciless, especially to children with no means.
Beautifully and sensitively written.
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This is so heartbreaking, Balaka. I hope Mona is okay.
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Such a heartwrenching story Balaka. This mindset of treating women as commodities is so disgusting.
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Sad and unfortunate turn of events for Mona. Hope she is okay now!
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Such a sad, Balaka! That girl seemed to have a bright future in your friend’s house, oh what a shame! What people can do for money…why o why!!
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Had lump in my throat and tears in my eyes, Balaka. Hope Mona is rehabilitated and is leading a better life.
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This is very heartbreaking. The poor girl didn’t deserve that fate. Hope she is doing well now and in contact with A’s family.
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Like a grandma with a bag full of stories, you daily bring to life little incidents we otherwise forget.. too good .. I’ve become your fan.
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I am humbled 🙂
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This is such a heart wrenching one Balaka, I do hope she can get back to normal life. Another gem from you Balaka
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this story is really heartbreaking. Hope Mona is doing well now. i am sick of hearing rape, molest, sex and women trafficking..
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Hi Balaka. What happened after that? Surely that’s not the end of the story!
I feel deeply for Mona and her circumstances which is probably the story of many!
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Oh no! 😦 A life that was blooming was suddenly nipped in the bud. Sigh! Wonderful storytelling tho. And a very powerful title.
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The rise and fall of Mona. A deeply emotional story sensitively told Balaka.
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God! That was so heart-breaking. Sad, how life plays games and how it changed Mona’s life! 😦
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poignant. Glad that she was rescued.
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What are the chances that I end up reading your blog today with M. Is this a true story? The current news from India has left me listless and unsettled so I couldn’t find my focus to write today. I thought, instead, I’d use the time I have to read a few other bloggers.
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Ohh! Balaka, I had goosebumps as I read this heart-rending story! Oh gosh! And, I thought in the beginning how good for Mona, she now had a loving family and a roof over her head. What a terrible blow life dealt her! Did you ever meet her afterwards?
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Balaka, this is such a sad tale … and while I was reading about the way A’s mom took care of Mona I was so hoping that she has a chance at a better life. It makes me feel so very small, whenever I hear about such incidents. Is she doing better, now that she’s at a shelter?
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This is heartbreaking. There age was with a decent life ahead of her and it all came to not. How unfortunate for her.
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This is so sad and heartbreaking. Its the sad reality of our society. Another interesting story from your memories.
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Gut-wrenching. We suck as a species, I can’t think of any milder way of putting it.
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Such a sad tale of Mona… Sold and left to fend for herself.. I hope she made it out of tbe NGO towards a better and more secure life.
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Sad indeed. Thanks for reading
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Such a sad story, how traumatic must it have been for Mona. Did you tell A about meeting her?
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Yes I told him about her
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So pathetic. Though it happens often in our society. It reminds me the story of my Bela di, who worked in our home as my brother’s babysitter. One day, we heard that she got married and left our city. But, her parents didn’t find any trace of her. A few years later, we heard that she was sold in a brothel of Mumbai. She didn’t come back anymore. Good that, Mona came back to the normal life after spending a year in the hell.
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This has happened to so many women. When I was working with Sanlaap I met so many women with similar fate. It is sad that we have hardly done anything to stop women trafficking.
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This is such a heart wrenching story. I hope Mona is safe now and doing well.Sending prayers her way.
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